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marianne ella

a poem : take my hand

10/26/2016

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Week 3, activity 3
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   Your eyes are dreamy, as they look at the stars in the night sky

      your words are always comforting, and I still don't know the reason why

         but when you cry my heart begins to ache

            this feeling of pain just has to go away  

   Stop smiling if it hurts so bad

      I'm already yelling it means I'm mad

         for goodness sake do understand?

            I love you, stop smiling, and come... take my hand. 
        
                       
4 Comments
Aya link
10/29/2016 08:54:13 am

Great poem. I like it
Beautiful

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Imee
11/1/2016 10:08:27 am


Hey it's pretty good(Arwin)
I like the poem ,
It's young and pure.

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Dakota link
11/7/2016 01:23:50 am

Hey,
That's a sweet poem, love the use of adjectives, great job. Nice vibes through the poem, just absouloutly love it! It makes me warm on the inside just reading it.
Dakota

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Érica
11/17/2016 12:54:43 pm

Hi!
I just love this poem. I am a sensitive and romantic person and this poem is very sweet so I just love it!
Please check out my blog:
http://bea8spg.edublogs.org/

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