a poem : take my hand

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a poem : take my hand

10/26/2016

Week 3, activity 3

Photo Credit: Vera Horvath

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   Your eyes are dreamy, as they look at the stars in the night sky

      your words are always comforting, and I still don't know the reason why

   but when you cry my heart begins to ache

this feeling of pain just has to go away

   Stop smiling if it hurts so bad

I'm already yelling it means I'm mad

   for goodness sake do understand?

I love you, stop smiling, and come... take my hand.

4 Comments

Aya link

10/29/2016 08:54:13 am

Great poem. I like it
Beautiful

Imee

11/1/2016 10:08:27 am

Hey it's pretty good(Arwin)
I like the poem ,
It's young and pure.

Dakota link

11/7/2016 01:23:50 am

Hey,
That's a sweet poem, love the use of adjectives, great job. Nice vibes through the poem, just absouloutly love it! It makes me warm on the inside just reading it.
Dakota

Érica

11/17/2016 12:54:43 pm

Hi!
I just love this poem. I am a sensitive and romantic person and this poem is very sweet so I just love it!
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